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i hate the way you twist me with a simple smile,
turning me inside out with just a word.
how can you do this much to someone like me?
i hate it, i do! i want it all to burn
(to the ground and
leave me alone
to throw myself into gluttonous dreams...
fleeting...
and
broken...)
why is it that you can shake that heart i long
ago tossed out the window? why is it that you
can make me feel? can't we just end this game
before the heart is pierced, broken and rotten?
(to forget and laugh about it
like
it's only a silly thought
nothing more.... )
how can you twist my tongue to disobey? now it's
only a lump of useless meat, too big to chew down.
the words i want to express are locked up and forgotten,
too dusty to be sincere. what kind of dirty tricks did you
use to get me so taken? why is it that i find myself with
my hands clenched around your neck?
(yet i'm to numb to crush...)
why do i find myself wanting you to tip me over
and pour me out? what did you do to get me
this shaken?
(without the option to
turn around and
run...)
p.s i hate you!
turning me inside out with just a word.
how can you do this much to someone like me?
i hate it, i do! i want it all to burn
(to the ground and
leave me alone
to throw myself into gluttonous dreams...
fleeting...
and
broken...)
why is it that you can shake that heart i long
ago tossed out the window? why is it that you
can make me feel? can't we just end this game
before the heart is pierced, broken and rotten?
(to forget and laugh about it
like
it's only a silly thought
nothing more.... )
how can you twist my tongue to disobey? now it's
only a lump of useless meat, too big to chew down.
the words i want to express are locked up and forgotten,
too dusty to be sincere. what kind of dirty tricks did you
use to get me so taken? why is it that i find myself with
my hands clenched around your neck?
(yet i'm to numb to crush...)
why do i find myself wanting you to tip me over
and pour me out? what did you do to get me
this shaken?
(without the option to
turn around and
run...)
p.s i hate you!
Literature
:: More Than You'll Ever Know ::
Does it make you proud
When you're the cause of someone's tears?
Does it bring you joy
Every time you insult the innocent?
Do you know what you do
When you speak with your vicious tongue?
Do you realize what happens
Every time you laugh at another's sorrow?
You see a woman with male friends
And you accuse her of craving sexual attention.
You notice a boy wearing glasses
And you tease him with the name "four-eyes."
There's a group of peace lovers;
You proclaim they're annoying hipsters.
The teenage boys who love each other;
You tear them asunder by calling them abominations.
Do you find pleasure
In being the source of a poor soul's ago
Literature
It tastes like love.
I could speak of her in riddles,
in aged, anatomy textbook terminology-
but, I wont.
You see, I cuffed this angel to my bedpost.
I sank my teeth into feathers she wore like a cage
and asked if I was dreaming, because Love,
you're not holding me. If you only knew the you in my head,
every night--tearing with these heavenly fingers
at the cracks in my sanity- you would allow me this!
Her tongue tastes my tears; nails clawing, clawing, clawing-
she takes away my pain,
but she doesn't belong to me either.
"We are but wolves.
Tell me, what does my blood taste like?"
Literature
Sick of society
I may live inside my own, twisted universe
I may change, sometimes for the worst.
What's normal to me is not normal for you.
Sometimes I just do what I need to do.
Behind a brick wall, I hoped someone would break it
I threw out my heart hoping someone would take it.
But I got tired of hiding and tired of hating
And instead of throwing myself at every guy, I'm waiting.
I'm sick of the person I tried to be
So basically, here I am, I will be me
I'm sick of the hatred, would you not agree?
.. Basically I'm sick of society.
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OMG JUST SOMEONE PLEASE STOP ME! RONDEK is taking over my life
it wasn't meaning that this would be something related to rondek but-but.... whyyy?!
it was just the meaning that they would only be a crack paring why have they become so cannon?!!
why am I seeing RONDEK everywhere!
FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELS!!!!!
okay so rant over!
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*EDIT*
well sorry about my ranting... it's only that when i uploaded this i had just noticed how much this
poem fits the relationship between my OC and my friend's OC
so i had kinda a mental breakdown....
anyway... this poem was somehow meant to describe the feeling of someone who do not want to fall in love,
falling in love. (again fit's to well in on our OC's) and the words at the end "p.s i hate you" you can in your mind change it
to "p.s i love you" (if you want) because for me it felt like the perspectiv of the person i wrote it from is one of those calssic
liars that has a hard time expressing their feeling. and/or tried to deny the feeling they have and try to turn it into something else....
i was tempted to put "p.s i love you" in the end it even fit's better... but for me it didn't really fit well with the character concept....
i know i'm must seem strange for that decison... but that's how i felt....
also you have to excuse the lack of romance in this.... i have never been good at writing about love and i didn't want it write about all
that "sunshine and unicorn, mushy, mushy" stuff.... because it feels like it's way to many poems about that so instead i wrote some kind
of "emo love poem" instead.... (i know i know it's a billion poem about unhappy love too!) but that's what i felt like doing....
anyway i hope you like it even if it isn't that classic love poem you usually read... or idk maybe it is?
you can read more about the contest here: [link]
Prompt used:
[link] by
[link] by
Thank you! for letting us use this as prompts >///<
__________________________________________________________________________________
OMG JUST SOMEONE PLEASE STOP ME! RONDEK is taking over my life
it wasn't meaning that this would be something related to rondek but-but.... whyyy?!
it was just the meaning that they would only be a crack paring why have they become so cannon?!!
why am I seeing RONDEK everywhere!
FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELS!!!!!
okay so rant over!
-------------------------------------------------------
*EDIT*
well sorry about my ranting... it's only that when i uploaded this i had just noticed how much this
poem fits the relationship between my OC and my friend's OC
so i had kinda a mental breakdown....anyway... this poem was somehow meant to describe the feeling of someone who do not want to fall in love,
falling in love. (again fit's to well in on our OC's) and the words at the end "p.s i hate you" you can in your mind change it
to "p.s i love you" (if you want) because for me it felt like the perspectiv of the person i wrote it from is one of those calssic
liars that has a hard time expressing their feeling. and/or tried to deny the feeling they have and try to turn it into something else....
i was tempted to put "p.s i love you" in the end it even fit's better... but for me it didn't really fit well with the character concept....
i know i'm must seem strange for that decison... but that's how i felt....
also you have to excuse the lack of romance in this.... i have never been good at writing about love and i didn't want it write about all
that "sunshine and unicorn, mushy, mushy" stuff.... because it feels like it's way to many poems about that so instead i wrote some kind
of "emo love poem" instead.... (i know i know it's a billion poem about unhappy love too!) but that's what i felt like doing....
anyway i hope you like it even if it isn't that classic love poem you usually read... or idk maybe it is?
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1st stanza:
1st line: capitalize I, add a comma after the word smile
2nd line: you need either a period or dash after the word word
4th line: capitalize all letter "I"s
3rd stanza:
1st line: capitalize why
2nd line: capitalize why
3rd line: capitalize can't
5th stanza:
1st line: capitalize how, capitalize now
2nd line: "to big to" needs to be written as "too big to"
3rd line: capitalize the, capitalize I,
4th line: to should be too, capitalize what
5th line: capitalize why and put a space between the why and the question mark, capitalize I
6th line: question mark after neck
6th stanza:
1st line: Capitalize why and I
2nd line: capitalize what
3rd line: question mark after shaken
End: capitalize I
Real Big Tip: Please remember to capitalize letter I's!!!!
1st line: capitalize I, add a comma after the word smile
2nd line: you need either a period or dash after the word word
4th line: capitalize all letter "I"s
3rd stanza:
1st line: capitalize why
2nd line: capitalize why
3rd line: capitalize can't
5th stanza:
1st line: capitalize how, capitalize now
2nd line: "to big to" needs to be written as "too big to"
3rd line: capitalize the, capitalize I,
4th line: to should be too, capitalize what
5th line: capitalize why and put a space between the why and the question mark, capitalize I
6th line: question mark after neck
6th stanza:
1st line: Capitalize why and I
2nd line: capitalize what
3rd line: question mark after shaken
End: capitalize I
Real Big Tip: Please remember to capitalize letter I's!!!!